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Let Go (My 8th Sonnet Written 4/12/2007 at 3.12am)

written by: kinzeesh

I love you: Words I long to say
I love you: Notes form my favourite song
I love you: Never goes away
I love you: Heartaching. Feels so wrong!
I love you: Stears my eyes to view
I love you: just can't stop this feeling
I love you: even through horrifying visions of someone with you
I love you: can't stop this heart from bleeding
I love you: but love's a game you've quit
I love you: not a game, a life-long dream
I love you: and I feel starved of it
I love you: I can't let go. It's gone extreme!
I love you: If you're reading this, now you know.
I love you. And I'm so sorry 'cause I've really tried, but I can't let go

Comments:

Thu, Jun 26, 2008 at 6:48AM

I like this! I also like the I love You's especially when the ideas start to conflict.

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