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A Broccolgram (giving veg. a voice)

written by: grjones

An ode to ye o green veggie,
form and features of a tree.

When I happen to encounter thee,
you promptly fill my heart with glee.

I simply want the world to see,
just how much you mean to me!

Comments:

Thu, Jul 3, 2008 at 2:44PM

Short but simple.
I like the idea of vegetables.
But, if you wanted, you could lengthen it. Say what it is that fascinates you about Veggi's. Go into detail and depth, but yet be clear and concise.

Fri, Jul 4, 2008 at 10:40PM

A Broccolgram it should stay. You description in there in the first stanza, it's quite clear you like the vegetable and so few people are posting epigrams these days I think it should remain in it's present form.

Nice food for thought. (sorry that pun typed it self)

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