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I Am Collapsed

written by: differance

My dreams about you quaked today.
My dreams were bridge to the claw of darkness.
My foggy side turned away its lights from the moon.
My sun pulled out all its colors one by one.
My stars turned off its light, dozed off.
My sayings ended in the eyes migrated.
Sorrow expectations were the guest in deserts.
My strength ended at the drunken of the mountains.
My dreams about you quaked today.
Firstly, I shake then I was windowed.
Now I'm collapsed.

Comments:

differance
Sat, Jul 19, 2008 at 2:03PM

Since I'm a new member, I'm a bit excited;))) So, I made a grammer mistake. It should be "shook" instead of shake.
Stay healthy;)))

brokenfear137
Sat, Jul 19, 2008 at 3:01PM

Hopefully noone will notice! Its your poem... write what the hell you like luv!! An intriguing piece. Well done.

differance
Sat, Jul 19, 2008 at 6:02PM

u r very kind, thank u very much for your compliments;))

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