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Love Hurts

written by: brokenfear137

If love is meant to be all around,
Will it ever come knocking on my door,
As there's a lonely girl that's yet to be found,
Who doesn't think she can sit and wait for ever more.

See there's someone whom makes my heart skip a beat,
I hate the uncertainty and angst it just makes me weak,
And although I smile inside each and everytime we meet,
My little voice fades and i am unable to speak.

So tell me if I will ever get to share my love,
It sure does seem like such a waste,
Maybe if the powers that be gave him a shove,
I might one day be able to get a little taste.

xEx

Comments:

Fri, Jul 25, 2008 at 10:02AM

Im sure you'll taste it;))

Sat, Apr 18, 2009 at 10:53AM

I like this piece! I think you have great ideas but your trying to force them into the rhyme scheme. Try letting go and just saying what you're thinking.

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