My heart bruised black and blue,
Loving a man I never knew.
Rose colored glasses,
Covering eyes of blue.
Protecting, ignoring things not fair.
Pretending inside you really did care.
Hiding what was real,
My spirit you tried to steal.
Taking them off,
Oh my gosh!
Swallow hard little girl,
Sadness, suffering walls mural.
A price to pay after misery's call.
I lost myself when gave my all.
Desperation, humiliation, without glee,
Feel this frustration inside of me?
Insecurity cuts clear through,
Damaging, scars left from you.
Violated, you used my heart.
Self destruction tears me apart.
Killing me slow each piece you chewed,
Crazy, am I coming unglued.
Begging and pleading I felt so small,
Hardcore,shrewd your loathing most of all.
Giving me morsels to satisfy.
A shell, our home, thats filled with lies.
Breaking my heart In pieces it lay.
Comments:
I think that you have a lot of talent and that your imagery is great! You should try getting away from rhyming. Some spots seem like you are forcing them into the rhyme like "without glee" to rhyme with me. I think your work would have more impact if you just wrote what you're thinking/feeling. Aside from that, great job!
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