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Proceeding As Planned

written by: des21089

What happens the day the sky goes black
Past the point of turning back
Rushing to the brink of destruction
Expanding the widespread dysfunction
The people scatter confused and afraid
Wondering how this mess was made
T'was us I said that afternoon
It was we that brought on this impending doom
This whole time not realizing we're damned
Ignoring all the warnings, proceeding as planned

Comments:

Salamander
Sun, Aug 17, 2008 at 9:32PM

wow i like that poem, is it a protest of global warming or pollution. just wondering

Script Runner
Tue, Aug 19, 2008 at 5:09AM

Well done. The flow here is well constructed. It is certainly a pleasing read, even if the content itself isnt particularly pleasant. Just because something isnt nice, doesnt mean it isnt true. haha. Again, good work.

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