Pain and suffering slowly sets in
Brought on by friends which makes
My insanity grow and
I have no one to turn to
For you have all betrayed me
Stabing me in the back and
Hurting my pride
My eyes are dry now and
My veins can bleed no more
For you have brought me to my knees
One last time
Comments:
Your poetry is very passionate and full of awesome imagery, but the spacing makes it difficult to read. You may want to consider taking the spaces out. Other than that, great job!
Thanks
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