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Live it

written by: SecondhandHero

Every moment is waiting to become a memory in time.
Every obstacle is waiting for someone who is ready to climb.
Every second is its very own.
Once you've lived it it's etched in stone.

So live every one of those seconds like its your first breaths of air.
and let no one take it to make it theirs.
Take the gift of another year and make the best you can of it.
Cause when such a fragile gift is given you don't let it slip.

Comments:

Tue, Sep 9, 2008 at 6:03AM

I really like your stuff. You have a way of stating what you want rythmically, simply, and yet descriptively. I really liked the lines, 'Every second is its very own. Once you've lived it it's etched in stone.' My only suggestion would be to rephrase the very last line. It breaks the rythym. Keep up the good work!

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