A spell she has cast,
that can't be undone.
My heart beats fast,
as I lie in the sun.
Her hair so bright,
where I can't sleep at night.
I see her talking,
with me unable to speak.
My words are gone,
with a breathless delight.
She talks like a song,
like and angel from above.
I can see her.
A picture of her.
Comments:
Thid stanza is missing letter(s)?
I see it could either be 'me' or 'her'.
Anyways, nice simple one. I like the way it was spaced out and the simple, yet effective use of the lines. =]
good job.
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