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Guardians

written by: Daniel91


This world feels to damn cold
I have been to known to act too old
For whom I should be
But people like me are the only key

We are the guardians of the sinless
We make sense of the senseless
We rescue those who edge over to the dark
I want to have that spark

That took a guy like me a zero
And turn them into a hero
I know it's a silly thing to dream
But maybe it's more than it seems

Comments:

Fri, Sep 19, 2008 at 4:53PM

This has good expression in it. I liked how you tried to rhyme. I'm not a fan of swear words-especially in writing-but I understand that you are trying to show your emotion.
Overall, a good piece.

Fri, Sep 19, 2008 at 9:28PM

Thanks

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