This world feels to damn cold
I have been to known to act too old
For whom I should be
But people like me are the only key
We are the guardians of the sinless
We make sense of the senseless
We rescue those who edge over to the dark
I want to have that spark
That took a guy like me a zero
And turn them into a hero
I know it's a silly thing to dream
But maybe it's more than it seems
Comments:
This has good expression in it. I liked how you tried to rhyme. I'm not a fan of swear words-especially in writing-but I understand that you are trying to show your emotion.
Overall, a good piece.
Thanks
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