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Defeat

written by: Sweet Insanity

Burn away the loathing
Slowly then faster
Over and Over and Over

Revulsion takes hold
You are no longer who you were
You are the epitome of disgust

Tear into yourself
Feel the biting stab of pain
A groan escapes again the strain

Accept your defiled defeat
Or struggle futilely to effect change
Either way you lose



Comments:

Daniel91
Fri, Jan 16, 2009 at 12:13PM

Wow powerful stuff here!
It strikes a chord
the flow is amazing and I like the three line stanza it's different

Sweet Insanity
Sat, Jan 17, 2009 at 10:38AM

Thanks! I wanted the 3 lines because I felt like it was stabbing... short bursts then pulling back. Yeah... I'm not really a fan of exercise!

Daniel91
Wed, Jan 21, 2009 at 9:13PM

Thats pretty interesting, I may try that if you don't mind

Sweet Insanity
Thu, Jan 22, 2009 at 3:46PM

Absolutely! have fun!

Daniel91
Tue, Feb 3, 2009 at 11:32AM

Hey check out some of mine stuff, if you have time...

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