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Who saves superman?

written by: Daniel91

Lights fade...
it gets harder to breath..
I fail to clasp the string...

Why was I the strong one..
Senses seem to fail..
Where to go from here...

I fall into nothing...
But what is this..
A widow into a perfect bliss..

Where you can look but dont touch...
Oh hell, that maybe not enough..
Oh hell..Oh hell....

This has been to much...
Who may I say has the sliver touch..
Who saves Superman?...

Comments:

Thu, Feb 19, 2009 at 8:36PM

confusing

Fri, Feb 20, 2009 at 11:09AM

how is it confusing?

Sat, Apr 18, 2009 at 11:01AM

It's a little confusing because you aren't giving the reader enough information to put your intended ideas in context.

Tue, Apr 28, 2009 at 7:04PM

exactly what sweet insanity said, sorry I've been abit inactive on here

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