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Something happend

written by: Tearful Angel

something happened ,i can't say what,
for if i did i wouldn't know how to express it,
you see it happened fast, and very silent
no one could see it and noone would dare to find it,

i'll have to admit that i don't quiet know
if it even happened so that it can shown,
because something happened , and i can't say when,
for if i did they'll say i'm a tattle tail,
but something happened and i won't pretend
that it wasn't something that took the happiness away...

Comments:

Sat, Aug 8, 2009 at 5:28PM

Nice poem! I like the intrigue you planted within... leaving the reader wondering, hanging.. waiting. :)

Sun, Aug 9, 2009 at 6:27AM

Thanx :)

Tue, Aug 11, 2009 at 1:32AM

THIS IS GOOD POETRY!!!

Sat, Aug 15, 2009 at 3:33PM

:)

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