something happened ,i can't say what,
for if i did i wouldn't know how to express it,
you see it happened fast, and very silent
no one could see it and noone would dare to find it,
i'll have to admit that i don't quiet know
if it even happened so that it can shown,
because something happened , and i can't say when,
for if i did they'll say i'm a tattle tail,
but something happened and i won't pretend
that it wasn't something that took the happiness away...
Comments:
Nice poem! I like the intrigue you planted within... leaving the reader wondering, hanging.. waiting. :)
Thanx :)
THIS IS GOOD POETRY!!!
:)
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