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Cold Rain

written by: UsKidsKnow

Running outside in the cold rain
Trying to make my body feel my hearts pain
Trying to convince myself that the worlds still sane

Is this how he thought he could win
Or was he overwhelmed by some sort of sin
I know that I should of asked him how he had been

Now he's in his eternal bed
What was going on in his head
I wish I could say what I never said

As I fell, crying in the hall
I though I heard his voice call
As outside the cold rain began to fall

The people's bodies are like wood
They act like he did something he should
and that he'd do it again if he could

After the service I decided to run
My life was drained of all it's fun
My heart weighing a ton

Running outside in the cold rain
Trying to convince myself that I'm not insane
Trying to make my body feel my hearts pain
Trying to convince myself that the worlds still sane

Comments:

Fri, Dec 4, 2009 at 8:59AM

i love it. good job!!! i understand. maybe you should take a look at mine. you will see. :) i am glad my body can't feel my hearts pain. i would surely die. thank you kindly!

Fri, Dec 4, 2009 at 8:59AM

oh. the world is not sane. i try to make sense, and it just doesn't. have a good day

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