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written by: Justpassmeby

Even though i must start anew
I will always be loving you
you can't imagine all the many chills
and how my heart hasn't grown still
one day i'm hoping you'll see
that you might have some love for me
my love for you will never be gone
and i will wait for you till forever and beyond

Comments:

T.W.N.D
Wed, Apr 20, 2011 at 12:17AM

This so awesome! I love the way it just flows and then before you know it, it is over. Keep writing!

E.A.H.
Wed, Apr 20, 2011 at 2:54AM

Agreeing with T.W.N.D. You have the skill. Keep writing!

gilligan3
Thu, Apr 21, 2011 at 1:30PM

huh... I had to read this one over a couple times before I understood it. good, short and abrupt but good

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