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a tangled mess

written by: Acquired Taste

How did we end up in this tangled mess of sweat and body parts?
Teenage action driven by passion
Every kiss harder to refuse
Each touch too hot to cool
Burning, aching, hungry with desire
Testing, teasing, tempting
Dancing, singing to the songs of our beating hearts
Clothes our only obstacle
Hands wander, kisses search for new destinations
Eyes close, mouth parts, and moans to our song become lyrics
Temperature rising,
Tender touch turns reckless, unplanned.
Love to lust, clothes with no purpose.
Fingers with a mission
Body parts swelling, aching, throbbing, searching for the remedy
In control, lose control, no control.
Deep breath of anticipation
At the exact moment when we become each others cure
A new dance, a new song
A slow dance, a sweet ballad
A tangled mess of sweat and body parts.


Fri, Apr 6, 2007 at 9:06PM

I've been waiting to see this one up here :)

Fri, Apr 6, 2007 at 10:00PM

umm... I need a cold shower! Ever think of writing a romance novel? Cause this is better than half that stuff! (trust me... I've read my fair share) ... I'm going to go take a cold shower! I had no idea you write like this!

Mon, Apr 9, 2007 at 10:35PM

Yeah i have to agree this one is very vivid, and with my imagination...well let me tell you...its all images for me...lol

Mon, Apr 9, 2007 at 11:41PM


Tue, Jan 29, 2008 at 12:59AM

Its flows well :)

Thu, May 8, 2008 at 5:50PM

something everyone can really feel, hehe

Fri, Sep 5, 2008 at 12:50AM

wow,well written,so real , so imaginative! ehehe. hotness!

Wed, Jun 15, 2011 at 10:51AM

This really makes me feel like I'm there with you feeling what you feel, tasting what you taste , smelling what you smell, seeing what you see... It does exactly what a poem is supposed to do it expresses the writers emotion and fills them that longing and desire that you so strongly feel inthe moment you are writing it... thanks for sharing your passion with us

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