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just life

written by: concubine

A life that was forgiven
and a life that was forgotten
Left an empty soul
and a heart that has a hole
and a girl in a lonely world.

A life that was mistaken
and a life was almost taken
Left a dream that was left behind
and a never-resting mind
and a girl that stays up all night.

Angels in heaven, is there God above?
Who do you care for? Who do you love?
Answer Please, answer please.

A life that is worth living
and a life was always giving
Left a pair of distrusting eyes
and a memory of empty lies
and a girl that isn't well.

Comments:

Tue, Jul 3, 2007 at 4:56PM

Yeah... you always could write! Glad to see that hasn't changed

Wed, Oct 24, 2007 at 3:44PM

Funny how we write poetry when our emotional life gets messed up. Keep at it, I hope it helps you make sense of stuff

Fri, Nov 9, 2007 at 6:33PM

very good poem i liked it

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