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The Hanging

written by: justhatgirl18

The Hanging



He walks to his sentence.
His body aches the sun burns the retinas of his eyes, beads of translucent sweat drench his brow.
He casts a hand upon his face to shield the long forgotten light, once bare through filtered iron bars.
Masked by a sense of pride he walks.
Through the boughs of eager townspeople ready to watch his fate be sealed.
They part, the people part like the sea parting for Moses.
He is no Moses, he is a sinner.
He is a termite in the foundation of society.
A tarnish in the silver framework.
He ascends the stairs, his breath steady.
His feet weighted by his guilt.
Soft murmurs fall like light feathers upon his ears.
He walks towards the rope, the drum roll sets, and takes a steady pace with that of his own beating heart.
The whispers turn into clamor, the people shout.
He casts one last glance to the spectators; not a friend amongst them.
The drum roll at it's peak pierces his numbed senses, awakening his fear.
He stops, and stands before a looped rope that mockingly sways back and forth in a gentle breeze.
It sways in the air, as his life sways before him.
A man. The devil? No a man cloaked in black approaches and ties a stiff rope, hardened by the sea air, around his neck.
He wants to scream, to plead:
"No I must not die, not like this, not now, God has yet forgiven me "
But his tongue lays restless behind closed lips, searching for the words; searching for hope, but unable to find strength in either.
He is paralyzed he cannot move, nor speak.
Only think and feel.
The drum roll ceases, the people cheer and curse.
He takes his last breath, and is thrust into uncanny darkness.
The crowd grows quiet.
He is still, and hangs.
His body twitches, last remnants of his life agonizingly slip away.
And he hangs, he hangs.




shannon b.

Comments:

Thu, Mar 27, 2008 at 12:01AM

feedback is welcome=]

Fri, Mar 28, 2008 at 3:19AM

You are a great story teller. Your attention to detail is fantastic. I see far too many writers get trapped into rhyming that feels forced. It's nice to see some free verse like this. I've constantly fought myself to prevent awkward, forced rhymes. I still don't think I've got it right. But then again, not everyone has Shakespeare's ability to write in the strict meter and rhyme of a Sonnet. Regardless, you have a talent for this. My advice: keep writing. It can only get better.

Mon, Apr 21, 2008 at 1:58PM

Is it supposed to be, "God has NOT yet forgiven me?" Or did you mean it to be as it was written?

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