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Thank You

written by: tomath13

I didnt want to write about Love
because She is not worth to live for

She held my hand so tight
She hug me with her smile
She kiss me with her lovely voice

but she slept with another.


a perfect Hypocrisy of Love.

Comments:

abrokenjoke
Sat, Apr 5, 2008 at 12:48AM

powerful in its swift directness. *fav* ;)

alf hickey
Sat, Apr 5, 2008 at 5:30AM

that's funny, very funny ! Love your work ! : )

Sweet Insanity
Sat, Apr 18, 2009 at 10:45AM

I like where you're going with this. Suggestion... use "Hugged" and "Kissed" if you're going to use the past tense held.

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