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Hopeless is Love

written by: justhatgirl18

I keep hoping its only a matter of time.
Before you realize the pain you put me through.
The nights I spend crying over you.
Ill wait it out, you know I will, but one day waiting won't come so easy.
Perfection is your key, im sorry perfect wasn't my destiny.
You've slammed the door on any chance,
You've murdered all your happiness,
To see you drag on the way you do, is too much to put me through.
I know it hurts, it hurts me too, I don't like what she did to you.
But that's the past, the present's now, don't shield your life around her lies.
Every day that passes by only puts you a step behind..
The shattered glass, the broken shards, the ones that pierce your bleeding heart.
Wishing more that you could see, she wasn't what was meant to be.
Yet I stand by your side, the one who keeps you warm at night.
At night, when all you have are her memories and the girl you'll never see, me.
But nothing I do seems to compare, to what you and her shared.
Your half-hearted smile barely reaches your eyes, and you think I don't know why?
I guess it's true what they say, that love will never come easily.
So I blame myself for wasting this time.
All the hoping I spent wishing you could be mine.
It's about time I bid ado.
And say so long to loving you.

Comments:

Mon, Apr 14, 2008 at 2:55AM

Its warped, but I like it : )

Mon, Apr 21, 2008 at 2:09PM

In my writings I aim to stay simple (I'll even use well worn phrases and expressions), but I also like to include the odd profound thought or idea, so as to communicate what I've learned in life. I also like adding humour occasionally.
In your writings you too tend to be simple, almost lyrical, and I would encourage you not to be afraid of that. Let what is meant to be profound, be more focused. Not obvious neccasarily, but demanding some attention. As far as humour...well, it never hurts, and is actually a good, and useful tool in writing. Don't shy from it, and add it like seasoning.

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