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Selfish vs. Selfless Round 1

written by: Sweet Insanity

I am a truly selfish person.
I think mostly of myself and my own fears, worries and stresses.

I become easily overwhelmed and can't see past my own small problems, then proceed to share them with the world.

I am a taker. I take and take while others less selfish than I, give.

When I think about who I am, I often find myself disappointed.
It is a scary and hurtful realization,
So I force myself to remember that I am a work in progress.
That this is simply one part of who I am as a whole today
And that I can work to change, to improve, to better myself

And once again, here I am, thinking about myself,
"self-analyzing"
Hell, I'm so self-absorbed I wrote this poem

Maybe one day I'll be able to become the person
I hope to be
The person I look at and think, there is a Truly Self-Less Woman
My Mother; who lives life for her children instead of for herself

Comments:

Sat, Apr 26, 2008 at 10:50PM

Thought provoking! Anxiously waiting for round 2! You've got me hooked!

Mon, Apr 28, 2008 at 5:22PM

Thank you! I hope that I can change before there is a need to write a second, but if I don't, I'll be sure to post it!

Thu, Sep 4, 2008 at 12:46AM

sometimes i see a lot of writers feelin this, because to write you need to look into ureself and immerse ure self in the tone of the poetry, but thru it all u need to know that its only a matter of choice:)

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