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Losing It

written by: GrenadeJumper

I'm losing my hold
Not listening to what I'm told
No one cares
They're just like you
What am I suppose to do
Let go of everything I thought was real
Everything that I feel
Cause I can't take this shit much longer
I close me eyes and begin to wonder
How did I wind up here in the first place?
I can't win the race
The weight is too much for me to hold
Try to be bold
Try to stand up
But then I fall back down
Hit the ground
I can't feel anything
I've lost everything
Because I followed what they said
Now I'm on the floor dead
With a bullet through my head

Comments:

Fri, Jun 6, 2008 at 6:05PM

Wow! Powerful! I think we've all felt that desperation but you take it to the next level.

Sun, Aug 16, 2009 at 4:17PM

Its a great poem, really felt it.

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