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A Night of Passion

written by: Catfish

I can feel the love that is in your eyes
I can feel the passion between your thighs
Our two hearts beating at a faster pace
Our bodies glistening as I hold your waist
Both of us unleashing our longing lust
You close your eyes as I continue to thrust
Cry out my name as your nails leave their marks
You blush like always, yet unnoticed in the dark
The bed creaks louder as we go faster
Your body shivers as you near closer
Your insides quiver, I feel the pressure
My body releases from the pleasure
You scream in ecstasy as we climax
Both of us collapse, our muscles lax;
You look at me with a smile on your face
Whispering, I love you, with subtle grace


Mon, May 19, 2008 at 12:29PM

OMG...wow...nicely laid out! (pun intended!). Rythme...beat and rhyme...exquisite! Very cool!

Mon, May 19, 2008 at 7:34PM

Great Job!

Tue, May 20, 2008 at 9:38PM

Thank you both very much XD

Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 6:05PM

I Love it! it was very intense ;)

Wed, Jul 14, 2010 at 5:51PM

ahah, wow! this is very ... natural? i like your rhymes, and they don't sound forced at all. great job!

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