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white castles

written by: curlypinky

She was working the night shift at work. She was by herself working as a pastry cook her dream since she was a girl. She got a call from her husband on the work phone. The momment she aswered the phone he started yelling at her about his cufflings he had a catering function in the morning. He was yelling at her telling her how useless she was and how horrible it was that she lost them. He said when you get home you better find them. By then she was in tears luckly she was alone and nobody could hear her crying it was almost closing time and she was afraid to go home. she tried to think of what she could do that might help. she thought maybe white castles would help. he loved white castles and it was rare when he got white castles seemed to make him happy. She hopped in her car and 15 minutes out of her way to get white castles. she drove an hour home what was another 15 minutes out of the way going to hurt it could only help. As she was in the car it was what seemed like an endless car ride. she could feel her stomach churning with butterflys and the heavyness in her head still afriad of when she eventulally got home. she tried to think of happy times they had together but it was even hard to think of that. What always helped in times like this was thinking about memories of the past and happy times. when she finally got home she gave him the bag of white castles. It didn't do any good he started screaming at her where the fuck are my cufflings he said. You always have to lose everything of mine you think white castle is going to help. don't you dare try to bribe me you selfish bitch. As she broke down into tears he said don't you dare cry I can't take the fuckin crying. I don't want to look at you. she was in a ball crying and trying to hold back the tears. She thought to herself was this the worst day of her life? she thought back to when she was a little girl watching her favorite cindrella movie and pretending to be a princess and the beautiful white castle. thinking to herself her life was no fairytale but a horrble nightmare. all she wanted in her life was a man that would treat her well and never put her down and hurt her. what she got was the oppisite a man that always put her down. she thought to herself would life ever give her what every women deserves. as a little girl it's about castles and princes but in real life it's about a good decent man that treats you well and never hurts you and a good home thats what every women deserves..

Comments:

Wed, Aug 26, 2009 at 12:27PM

for every women that has gone through an abusive relationship. the only thing that matters is a good man that treats you good and never hurts you

Tue, Sep 1, 2009 at 6:06PM

Well done. You really brought in some good emotion and I am sure there are many people who can relate to this situation or one like it.
Good writing.

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