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If I could

written by: T.W.N.D

If I could tell you how much I love you,
The world would end before I finished,
The trees would fade and lose their color,
The ocean would dry up,
And the animals would be no more than bones.
If I could tell you how much I care about you,
The sun and moon would have exploded before I finished.
The stars would lose their shine,
And the clouds would have moved away.
If I could tell you how much I wonder about you,
The snow would have come and gone and,
The rain would have flooded the Earth.
If I could tell you what you truly are,
Then you'd finally see that you're everything I need.

Comments:

OurSacredHonor

Tue, Feb 12, 2008 at 11:35PM

If I could tell you how much I love this piece
This comment box would run out of space before I finished,
The characters would group together into words,
The lines of praise would add up,
And the punctuations would be no more than pauses...

armandopereira

Tue, Mar 25, 2008 at 8:31PM

It sounds to me like you believe as much in a coming apocalypse as you do your love for this person. Some good stuff there, though. Somehow I dig the line about the animal bones. It just jars, in the best way.

Sweet Insanity

Fri, Apr 25, 2008 at 10:34AM

I really like this one! I know exactly how you feel and it's incredibly hard to describe in a way that hasn't been said a thousand times over, but you do a great job of finding your own way of doing so. You are very talented and I can't wait to read more of your works!

writingislife

Sat, Jan 31, 2009 at 10:15PM

That was such a romantic prose, whoever you wrote that for is very lucky. I cannot wait to read more of your work, you have a special gift.

Wild Serenity

Sun, Aug 23, 2009 at 4:35PM

Really beautiful. It made me think. I really appreciate the level of your emotion. Thank you! =D

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