You ripped away my barriers
Then shredded my defenses
You had me stranded
Vulnerable, naked
Then you started to mold me
Into what you really wanted
And I let you
My stupid naivety
Led me to believe
That our love was
Mutual mutilation
Not one sided
But your walls remain in tact
And you're still in full control
When I'd lost all of mine
To you
years ago
Manipulation in the name of love
Promises of and for the future
Without a care for the present
And in the end you have the power
And I'm standing naked
Dressed only in tears
Comments:
your images are beautifully bitter, the sadest stuff I have heard. I hope your expression carries into joy too- not that it has to. (:)
Thank you very much! I'm glad my emotions came through. I honestly don't know what I'm capable of, but keep reading my works and you can let me know if you think I can bridge the gap.
That is really good.
Thanks!
im totallly feeling it !good job!
I'm glad you like it!
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