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Double Sided Axe of Arrogant Double Standards

written by: Sweet Insanity

You ripped away my barriers
Then shredded my defenses
You had me stranded
Vulnerable, naked

Then you started to mold me
Into what you really wanted
And I let you

My stupid naivety
Led me to believe
That our love was
Mutual mutilation
Not one sided

But your walls remain in tact
And you're still in full control
When I'd lost all of mine
To you
years ago

Manipulation in the name of love
Promises of and for the future
Without a care for the present

And in the end you have the power
And I'm standing naked
Dressed only in tears

Comments:

Sat, Mar 1, 2008 at 6:27AM

your images are beautifully bitter, the sadest stuff I have heard. I hope your expression carries into joy too- not that it has to. (:)

Sun, Mar 2, 2008 at 7:25PM

Thank you very much! I'm glad my emotions came through. I honestly don't know what I'm capable of, but keep reading my works and you can let me know if you think I can bridge the gap.

Sun, Aug 31, 2008 at 10:16AM

That is really good.

Sun, Aug 31, 2008 at 10:38AM

Thanks!

Mon, Sep 1, 2008 at 4:15AM

im totallly feeling it !good job!

Mon, Sep 1, 2008 at 9:59AM

I'm glad you like it!

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