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hug

written by: babeestars

Go you ever get the time, where, you just want a hug. A simple thing to ask for, but, maybe not such a simple thing at all. You don't want the kind of hug you get when leaving your grandparents and your Nan plants a big sloppy kiss on your cheek and won't let go of you as though she will never see you again, but that actually you do and the same thing happens again. And you don't want the hug from someone you barely know, where they hug you just because they don't want to be rude because they hugged your friend. Their arms are draped limply round your body as they try not to get to close. You want the kind of hug that could quite easily last forever and you would be quite happy, the kind of hug where nothing in the world can bother you. A mother's hug, where warm smile seems to wrap around you to protect you from everything. Or the hug from the closest friend in the world, where their reassuring arms leave an imprint on your soul, so you know that this hug will stay in your heart forever because they truly meant it. And that is the hug I want right now. A hug from someone who does care, and doesn't just say it, from someone who wants to make a difference, and who listens when I cry in their arms and doesn't just shrug it off. I want someone capable of giving that meaningful hug. that is the hug i want, but i am left standing here in the cold.

Comments:

Thu, Mar 20, 2008 at 5:55PM

This is awesome! Well thought out!

Fri, Mar 21, 2008 at 7:09AM

thanks :)
not sure about the end myself
the other ending woulda been
and thats the hug i want right now, but still im left standing in the cold.

Fri, Mar 21, 2008 at 9:55AM

I think either works.... but honestly I like the one in the comment better. It has a sad twist to it. * HUG *

Fri, Mar 21, 2008 at 2:14PM

yer i have to agree , i prefer that one to
but i forgot about it before submitting it
i might go back and change it

Fri, Mar 21, 2008 at 5:28PM

Good change! Good prose!

Fri, Mar 21, 2008 at 6:13PM

hehe
:)
thanks for your help

Sat, Mar 22, 2008 at 9:53PM

Anytime! I love your works!

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