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Sweet as Honey

written by: bellasoņadora

Another day another dollar, but I'm still feeling six pence none the richer. At least at times I feel like that's what my life adds up to. Almost like I'm not defined by anything, just work, work and oh yeah more work. The intentions behind everything are gone - with no hope of ever coming back - kinda like a black hole i guess. It's the same as the actions of a drone - an object without life, emotions, thoughts. All my good deeds become just deeds and all my actions the same. No more emotion - no more thoughts - a choice becomes just a choice with no chance of a consequence, and with out a consequence who wants to make a choice. Time kinda floats by, with no rhyme or reason - it does its own thing and forgets to include me. But I can change all that - like I said before you just have to believe, its kinda my motif - watch you'll see - one day I'll be a queen with my own thoughts and dreams and a purpose - then, just maybe, life will be as sweet as honey.

Comments:

Wed, Apr 25, 2007 at 5:20AM

What's "sweet" is how you took your feelings of drudgery and wrote them in a comparable fashion, but then as hope began to squeeze her way into your thoughts your writing got more of a bounce to its step... turned almost poetic at the end. Intentional or accidental, it reads beautiful, sweet as honey ;-)

Fri, Apr 27, 2007 at 9:41PM

I know what you mean. I like how you were able to put it all into words! You really are a great writer. I wish I had your skill.

Sat, May 5, 2007 at 5:57PM

:)

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