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Almost There (A 100 Word Story)

written by: JDavidBodzin

Almost There


The power was off, so were our computers. Management was telling us that we can go home, in my mind I'm already gone; paddling through the break, warm saltwater and sparkling sunshine bathing my body. Dolphins leap from the aquamarine and urge me to join them. Throwing our heads back we laugh and click at our good fortunes. Suddenly A dark wave rises and barrels above us enveloping and sucking me over the falls. I surface gasping and see to my horror that someone had harpooned the dolphins ,a shark gnawed my leg and the power was back on.

Comments:

Sun, Aug 23, 2009 at 1:22AM

i love how unique this is...its got good creativity and makes you think a little about what's actually happening. fun to read ;] kudos!!

Mon, Aug 24, 2009 at 1:44PM

Thank you essenceofgone. If your interested in 100 word stories and want to participate go to www.podcasting.isfullofcrap.com and submit an entry for the weekly contest.

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